
Bright as the day through darkest night
From valleys low to mountains high
You go before me, you go behind me
Untroubled under a troubled sky
Through clouds that unleash stinging rain
On roads under sunfire in aching blue
Where fog shrouds the road in wraithing white
Yet still, still, I am with you.
Only a sojourner in a transient world
Weary on a road ever so long
Only a speck on a river passing,
Only an echo, a fragment of song
Yet your heart yearns for me from the brooding sky
As I crest the mountain in rain-washed hue
All through the winding journey home
Still, oh still, I am with you.
I am not sure how often and how long I have tried to write this poem, but each time, my words failed me. (This is the Purple Poem I wrote about in an earlier blog post). How to explain that feeling of God hand cupping over me as I do the monthly trip from Mae Sariang to Chiang Mai and back on my bike? How to weave into a poem the different emotions of the ride, the different scenes and backdrops? Finally, this morning I was able to somewhat put a tongue to it. Besides the obvious inspiration of those drives, Psalms 139 and James 4:5 were also inspirations for the poem.
I am also currently working on a new book of poetry and essays. I think it’s far enough along that I can say it’s going to happen, but it’s impossible to give any release date right now. I do, however, want to get it finished before I start my online course for my teacher’s license in January, which will take up all my spare time.
Stay tuned! 🙂
It’s beautiful!
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This is so, so beautiful, Lori. I have loved Psalm 139 for a long time and I really like how you weave that refrain into the poem. And the descriptive words… you need to submit this to Leaf 2023.
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Actually, this was the purple poem that I couldn’t seem to get on paper. It was stuck for so long. And to tell the truth, your poem in the Leaf (I can’t remember the name and I am not close to the book right now) helped me shape it into words. But sadly, I can’t publish it in the Leaf since I already published it in my new book, Dustbeams. 🙂
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I am so glad your purple poem found shape. I was feeling sorry for it=)
And aww, thanks, I’m glad to know my poem could help! I forget, is Dustbeams available on Amazon already? I believe I will need to get a copy sometime=)
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Yes it is available! And I need a copy of yours, too
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